Your balance is good, and rhythm is very well represented with repetition. The only thing you could have done was to find a different part for contrast or rhythm.
It is nicely done. It is very abstract. emphasis is done very well. I think the one you used for unity would have been cooler in emphasis but its still very nice.
I really like your contrast it really shows you understood what you were doing. I would suggest to make it more abstract though, so you can't tell what letters you are using in all of them.
all your elements are well represented. It is well constructed and nicely abstracted. I can tell that you understood what you were doing. One thing that could improve it is switch rhythm and pattern.
Your representation of the elements and principles of design were very well represented. You look as if you have a very good understanding of them. Your use of pattern was very effective. Your contrast could always be improved on though, maybe by using less white and more black.
I think you had a very good grasp on the idea and principle of emphasis. Though your understanding of balance is a little thrown off balance I think that the idea you had when picking your balance was thought about but not necessarily carried out.
Your balance and reverse nicely represent the principles. I think that you could have don something different for either pattern or contrast. They are closely related.
You showed the principles of design very well in this. I especially think the "R" you used for unity looks nice. Your contrast and pattern are very similar, though, and I think it works for either principle of design, but you should maybe choose another way to represent one of them for some added variety. But overall it is very good.
In my opinion, I think you could have done something else for your movement, I cant really see how that shows movement. Other than that, your balance is very nicely done, it really shows that principle of art. Good Job!
Your balance is good, and rhythm is very well represented with repetition. The only thing you could have done was to find a different part for contrast or rhythm.
ReplyDeleteIt is nicely done. It is very abstract. emphasis is done very well. I think the one you used for unity would have been cooler in emphasis but its still very nice.
ReplyDeleteI really like your contrast it really shows you understood what you were doing. I would suggest to make it more abstract though, so you can't tell what letters you are using in all of them.
ReplyDeleteall your elements are well represented. It is well constructed and nicely abstracted. I can tell that you understood what you were doing. One thing that could improve it is switch rhythm and pattern.
ReplyDeleteYour representation of the elements and principles of design were very well represented. You look as if you have a very good understanding of them. Your use of pattern was very effective. Your contrast could always be improved on though, maybe by using less white and more black.
ReplyDeleteI think you had a very good grasp on the idea and principle of emphasis. Though your understanding of balance is a little thrown off balance I think that the idea you had when picking your balance was thought about but not necessarily carried out.
ReplyDeleteYour balance and reverse nicely represent the principles. I think that you could have don something different for either pattern or contrast. They are closely related.
ReplyDeleteYou showed the principles of design very well in this. I especially think the "R" you used for unity looks nice. Your contrast and pattern are very similar, though, and I think it works for either principle of design, but you should maybe choose another way to represent one of them for some added variety. But overall it is very good.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, I think you could have done something else for your movement, I cant really see how that shows movement. Other than that, your balance is very nicely done, it really shows that principle of art. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI can definetly see why you put that in the movement box because it sort of looks like a boomerang and the represents movement. good job!
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